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你好呀，我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。今天，给大家带来一个IELTS雅思大作文的原创范文。老规矩，以下是正文目录：

1，题目

2，审题

3，高分范文

4，范文朗读

5，范文地道词汇中英对照，包括：

题目改述
讨论+观点类大作文高分句型
展示“词汇丰富度”的词汇&短语
展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇&句型

题目：

Some people think that cultural traditions will be destroyed when they are used as money-making machines aimed at tourists. Others believe it is the only way to save such traditions in the world today. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

审题：

Type: Discuss & Opinion 讨论+观点 (我的观点：agree: making money is a good way, but not the only way)
Body 1: profiting from culture cheapens it and will cause its disappearance
Body 2: locals will preserve their culture because it makes money/education of young is better
Key words: will be destroyed / only way

- Model Answer 高分范文 & 范文朗读 -

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It is believed by some that the commercialization of cultural elements geared towards tourism will cause their destruction, whereas others feel this is the sole method to help with their protection. This essay shall explore both views; however, in my opinion, I believe this type of profiteering will result in ensuring their survival rather than their ruin, though I also think that this method is not exclusive.

One of the main reasons why some feel the commercialization of cultural heritage may eventually lead to the vanishment of traditions is that locals will be seduced by the idea of making a profit, no matter how that money is made. As such, traditional elements, such as ethnic singing and dancing activities, will eventually become hollow and shallow, and as a consequence, tourism will gradually die off, with the final result of extinguishing these traditions. The same could be stated for physical buildings, whereby old buildings have been demolished simply to be replaced by replicas focused towards tourists. This use of cultural elements for commercial ends, consequently, runs the risk of ensuring their demise.

Many regions, however, seek to make a living through showcasing their unique traditions to outsiders, causing local citizens of that area to have a vested interest in the continuation of their traditional culture, and in turn, helping to safeguard the survival not just of the traditions but also their livelihoods. Ethnic minorities, for example, continue to survive with their traditions intact, as it is the commercial promotion of their unique cultural identity that attracts onlookers and tourists. Nevertheless, the least intrusive method to preserve cultural traditions while simultaneously maintaining their integrity is by infusing the school curriculum with courses that promote cultural traditions, particularly as the modern world allows for all students to use the Internet to easily engage with culture.

In conclusion, though both arguments are indeed valid, I think that through the promotion of culture in school courses, the customs and traditions of a region will be maintained with greater purity than simply through selling cultural artifacts to tourists.