- A+
??布景与亮点需要从自个对该领域的知道、自个所获的奖项、参加的活动来论说，假定没有，就说快乐喜爱。
◆ During My undergraduate years, (I have been awarded xx 
and have attended xx) I have accumulated the specialized knowledge of the relevant field and I am quite convinced that it is a promising profession in this day and age. That‘s why I am determined to dedicate the rest of my life to it.
在本科期间，（我得过xx奖，参加过xx活动）我堆集了有关领域的专业常识，我也很断定，这个专业在现如今对错常有出路的。因而，我抉择把余生都献给它。
◆ (I’m a student with lots of hobbies, eg. I enjoy …)As for my personality, my friends often call me a diligent and adaptable person with teamwork spirit. Therefore, I’m quit confident that I can adapt to the new life here within no time and survive the postgraduate years–of course，if I’m so lucky to be given the chance.
(我有许多喜爱，比方说，我喜爱……)，就性格而言，我的兄弟都说我勤勉，习气才能强，还有团队精力。所以，我信赖，假定给我这个机缘，我必定能习气这儿的日子，并顺畅结业——假定我有幸能有这个机缘的话。
四、标明决计+结束谢谢
