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【教育类】
Nowadays, children rely too much on the technology, like computers, smartphone, video games for fun and entertainment, some people believe that playingsimpler toys or playing outside with friends would be better for the children'sdevelopment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 如今，孩子们过度依靠科技产品，例如核算机、智能手机、电子游戏。 有人认为玩玩具或和兄弟们户外游戏关于孩子们打开愈加有利，是不是认同?(2016年2月28日)
【考情点评】
2016年1月23日刚刚查询学生是不是大约玩游戏，2月28日再次查询相同主题，只是换成孩子们是大约玩游戏仍是户外运动。可见考试周报解析关于写作备考的重要性。托福写作即体现冷题回补，又体现热题恒热的特征。主张童鞋勤于练笔，写作天然瓜熟蒂落。
【有关考题】
Some people believe that video games could inspire young students’ interestand make their study more efficient rather than distracting them and a waste oftime, so young students should be allowed to play video games. Do you agree ordisagree? 有人认为游戏可以激起学生的学习快乐喜爱，前进他们学习功率，而不是涣散他们的精力和浪费他们的时刻，是不是认同? (2016年1月23日)
【作家情绪】 孩子们大约被鼓舞以简略玩具或户外运动的方法来放松文娱。
【脑筋风暴】
① 笑笑三岁了，三岁的笑笑现已可以熟练运用I-phone 手机，喜爱看“关头强”和“喜洋洋”，喜爱打I-pad的街机三国，他甚至晓得游戏人物张飞，李典，夏侯惇等。
②回想我的年少年代，小鹏哥的文娱方法无比简略：丢沙包、跳房子、做迷藏、骑马交兵……，这些户外运动，经济而安康，我和小火伴们呼吸着新鲜空气，接近大天然。比较个别性的文娱方法，集体性的经历生长让咱们感触高兴的一起，也健壮了终身的老友。
【思路拓宽】
【网络游戏或手机文娱的利害】
① 电子游戏以其制造精巧、音效绝佳、图文并茂、情节诱人等特征得以盛行。适度地玩游戏也是一种放松身心的方法，一起，竞技类游戏关于孩子们的智力开发有必定的利好。
② 竞技类的电子游戏易使玩家上瘾，特别是关于短少自律性的孩子而言，过于沉浸电子游戏简略使孩子们孑立、自闭、交际方面力不从心。
【户外运动或简略游戏的利好】
① 户外运动有利安康，孩子们可以接近天然，健体强身。
② 集体生长有利孩子，集体性游戏训练孩子们的交际才能、培育孩子们的协作知道，一起，使玩家收成宝贵的友谊。
③ 陪孩子们做一些简略的亲子游戏是极好的增强家庭枢纽的方法。
【范文赏析】
【首段】 布景介绍 + 作家情绪
Children tend to revel in high-tech products such as smart phone or on-linegames, sometimes without being aware of doing so. Sure enough，they can have amerry mood when they amuse themselves by playing computer games or mobilephones. My stand，however，is that going outside for amusement or playing simplertoys is more preferable and feasible in terms of providing those who are in theformative years with beneficial enjoyment.
【二段】 网络游戏或手机文娱的利害
Indeed, games provided by high-tech products enjoy tremendous popularityamongst children and their peculiar fascination can be owed to their uniquemerits. More precisely, video games are characteristic of vivid pictures,appealing music or unexpected challenge, which presents players with a goodsource of relaxation. Meanwhile, the process of surmounting difficulties in thevirtual world can still enable children to have a creative mind and thus improvetheir decision-making or crisis-solving abilities. However, as children lackself-discipline, the chances that they will ever be able to take up physicalexercises or befriend with peers are remote，especially considering that theamount of time young kids spend watching television or playing games isastonishing. Even worse，children often ignore the outside world as a result of the addition.
【三段】 户外运动或简略游戏的利好
Embarking on outdoor activities or opting for simpler toys，as a commendablehobby， is quite different and has many visible merits. For a start, playingoutdoor games with friends is physically beneficial because children can breathethe fresh air, stretch their bodies and enjoy the closeness to nature. Thisdebate reminds me of my childhood, I was keen on catching dragonflies,butterflies, fish, and crickets in summer or playing snow fight with my closefriends in winter. What we reaped were joyous childhood and healthy physique. Also,growing experience, via associating and communicating with peers, makes achild sociable and optimistic, with no time for boredom. Instead of isolatingoneself, having fun outside with friends makes a child lean to cooperate withmates and unite congenial peers, in this way, one's circle of friends grows. Eventually, accompanying children to play simpler games such as block building,flying paper plane, poker card game is an effective way to strengthen theparent-child relationship.
【尾段】再次亮明观念
My stand is that although high-tech products can provide relaxation forleisure hours, electronic games will inevitably bright about sedentarylifestyle, poor eyesight and even obesity. Thereby, children should beencouraged to play simpler toys or do physical exercises with friends. Imaginably, the family tie can be strengthened and a child’s group experiencecan be fostered.
【经典语料】
1. Going outside for amusement or playing simpler toys is more preferableand feasible i
n terms of providing children who are in the formative years withbeneficial enjoyment. 关于生长中的孩子而言，户外运动或许简略游戏是愈加可取可行的文娱方法。
2. enjoy tremendous popularity amongst children 在孩子中极受等待
3. Their peculiar fascination can be owed to their unique merits.他们因其一起的利益展示了特有的魅力。
4. video games are characteristic of vivid pictures, appealing music orunexpected challenge 电子游戏一般以具有精巧的画面，悦耳的音乐和出其不料的应战为特征。
5. However, as children lack self-discipline, the chances that they willever be able to take up physical exercises or befriend with peers areremote，especially considering that the amount of time young kids spend watchingtelevision or playing games is astonishing.可是，因为孩子们短少自律，他们能从事体育训练或许健壮同龄老友的机缘不多，特别是思考到他们花费在电视游戏方面的惊人的时刻。
6. Playing outdoor games with friends is physically beneficial becausechildren can breathe the fresh air, stretch their bodies and enjoy the closenessto nature. 和兄弟们从事户外运动有利安康，因为孩子们可呼吸新鲜空气、训练身体、接近天然。
7. in this way, one's circle of friends grows 以这样的方法，人可以健壮更多兄弟。
8. What we reaped were joyous childhood and healthy physique.咱们收成了年少的快乐喜爱和安康的体质。
9. Although high-tech products can provide relaxation for leisure hours,electronic games will inevitably bright about sedentary lifestyle, poor eyesightand even obesity. 尽管高科技产品是休闲文娱的方法，电子游戏无疑会带来久坐的日子方法、视力降低、甚至肥胖。
10. Thereby, children should be encouraged to play simpler toys or dophysical exercises with friends. 因而，咱们大约鼓舞孩子们简略游戏或许体育训练。
【创造感言】
①小曲好唱，唱好也难。越是看似简略的标题，越难写到特性精彩。在思维不变的情况下，言语的包装可以令你的表达方法如虎添翼，异乎寻常。
②本篇字斟句酌、字斟句酌、主题清楚、逻辑清楚、表达特性、句法多变，可为童鞋研习之佳作。
【作者介绍】
新东方网专栏作家：薛鹏(@雅思小鹏哥)，长春市作家协会会员，高中年代出书诗文集《选择刚烈》, 每年创造20万字托福雅思自创语料库以及范文。吉林大学外国言语学及使用言语学硕士。17年英语教育经历 (7年新东方雅思托福SAT教育阅历)，前长春新东方功勋教师，多次培训出雅思和托福高分学员(雅思写作8分，托福写作29分)。
爱日子，爱运动，爱音乐影片，爱旅行美食，爱读书拍摄，更爱英语教育。20岁登上英语讲台，主讲英语万词速记课程。了解GRE、IELTS、TOEFL、SAT、CET等各等级词汇教育。
大一时即在报刊杂志上掌管“英语学习系列谈”以及“薛鹏教你学单词”等专栏。2006年获得“外研社/朗文杯”新概念背诵大赛吉林省赛区大学成人组冠军，全国总决赛大学成人组二等奖。
关于各类写作课程有精深研讨，授课方法行云流水，妙语解颐，常识见识深沉，对学员极具有启迪性和鼓励性。
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