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star规则:
(s) situation - describe the situation and the context in which the event took place.
(t) task - talk about the tasks you had to complete (i.e. your challenge or responsibility).
(a) action - explain the actions you took to address the above-mentioned challenges or responsibilities.
(r) results - explain the kind of results you achieved. when describing the outcome, if possible, mention numbers and quantifiable facts
star规则 :
(s)情况-描绘作业发生的情况和布景。
(t)使命-谈论你有必要结束的使命(即你的应战或责任)。
(a)行为-说明您为应对上述应战或责任所采纳的行为。
(r)成果-说明你所获得的成果。在描绘成果时,假定可以的话,要说到数字和可量化的实际
situation - “well, as a recent graduate of ... university, i think my greatest achievement was what i managed to accomplish during my time there. my scholarship only covered half of the tuition, and my family was unable to support me financially.?
情况——“嗯,作为一个刚结业的……我认为我最大的成就是我在那里所获得的作用。我的奖学金只付出了一半的学费,而我的家人也无法在经济上养活我
task - “so, i learned early on that i had to manage my time down to the hour in order to be efficient and on top of everything.”
使命——?裕液茉缇脱Щ崃耍矣斜匾咽笨檀虻愕揭桓鲂∈保员慵岢指咝Ш妥罡叩南な!?
action - “i worked in every summer and winter vacation. through hard work and dedication, i managed to balance studying, working part-time, and even volunteering to gain some experience. it was tiring at times, but i scheduled pretty much everything i had to do in my personal calendar. this way, i never missed a deadline, assignment or any other responsibility.”
行为——“我每年的暑假和寒假都在作业。经过尽力作业和奉献,我成功地平衡了学习,兼职作业,甚至自愿获得一些经历。有时会很累,但我把一切要做的作业都组织在我的自个日程上。这样一来,我就历来没有错失过最终期限、使命或任何其他责任。”
results - “in the end, i graduated with a gpa of 3.8 +作用, and also interned as the university social media assistant during my last 2 semesters. there, i also learned a lot about marketing, how to communicate with our followers, and managed to organize the biggest university event where up to 500 students showed up.”
成果:“最终,我结业时的均匀绩点为3.8+作用,并在最终两个学期担任了大学交际媒体助理。在那里,我也学到了许多关于商场推广的常识,如何与咱们的跟从者交流,并设法组织了一场最大的大学活动,有多达500论理学生参加。”
example 1:
situation: my greatest achievement was in a previous role where i was working as part of a team on the launch of a new company product.?
task: we wanted to make the product launch as successful as possible.
action: so we started out by brainstorming different ideas about how we could launch the product before presenting them to our manager for approval. after he gave us the go ahead to launch the product, we worked tirelessly to push it out to as many people as
possible.
result:? my task was to create the social media posts during the product launch, and these proved to be a huge success. once the product launch was finished my manager informed us that we, as a team, had managed to surpass all previous product launches in terms of sales!
比方1:
情况:我最大的成就是在之前的一个职位上,我作为一个团队的一员,在发布一个新的公司产品。
使命:咱们期望让产品的发布获得尽可以的成功。
行为:所以咱们领先行不一样的脑筋风暴,在提交给咱们的司理附和之前,关于如何推出产品的主意。在他答应咱们推出这个产品后,咱们不知疲倦地把它推广给尽可以多的人。
成果:我的使命是在产品发布时刻创建交际媒体上的帖子,这些帖子获得了无量的成功。在产品发布结束后,我的司理告诉咱们,作为一个团队,咱们现已设法在出售方面跨越了之前一切的产品发布
example 2:
situation and task: my greatest achievement was working in my last role where i managed to help the company win an important sales contract.?
action: ?i was part of a three-person team and our job was to put together the company proposal, and then deliver it to our manager who would submit it for tender. we worked really hard for two weeks to get the information and the proposal together, and we made sure it was as cost effective and efficient as possible.
result: ?a week after my manager submitted our proposal, we received the news that we had won the sales contract! it was great team effort, and something i am still very proud of today.
示例2:
情况和使命:我最大的成就是在我的最终一个职位上作业,我设法协助公司赢得了一份重要的出售合同。
行为:我是一个三人团队的一员,咱们的作业是把公司的提案收拾起来,然后交给咱们的司理,由司理提交投标。咱们花了两周的时刻来搜集信息和提案,并保证它尽可以地具有本钱效益。
成果:在我的司理提交了咱们的提案一周后,咱们收到了咱们赢得了出售合同的消息!这是一个巨大的团队尽力,我今日仍然感到非常骄傲