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高档词汇，脱节俗套
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攻略一：摒弃笼统表达，细化描绘。
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笼统词具有较强的归纳性，考生相对了解，但具体词能形象地描绘事物或反映细腻的豪情颜色改变，使表达更出彩。
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例1：that's a very wonderful movie.?
wonderful比照笼统，可以选用更为具体的词：
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instructive 有教育意义的
moving/touching 令人感动的
enlightening 具有启示性的?
攻略二：多用高档表达，短语优先。
?恰当地选用一些恰当、地道的高档表达对前进书面表达的得分层次至关重要。所以考生不妨思考在文章中运用较高档的表达，充分展示自个的言语功底。
?1. 学校日子
?可以做某事：be able to do sth.晋级表达：be capable of doing sth.?be competent to?do sth.尽力做某事：try to do sth.晋级表达：spare 
no effort to do sth.strive/ endeavor to do sth.或人必需要做的作业：something sb. must do晋级表达：a must for sb.企图做某事：try to do sth.?晋级表达：attempt/seek to do sth.?make an attempt to?do sth.参加：join in, take part in?晋级表达：participate in,get involved in,attendengage in?
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2. 动作行为
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记住：remember
晋级表达：keep/bear in mind that...
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面临，面临：face?
晋级表达：
be faced with
meet with,
encounter?
知道到：know, realize?
晋级表达：
be aware of/that
be conscious of
come to realize?
注重：value
晋级表达：
attach great importance to
take sth. seriously
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赏识：visit?
晋级表达：
pay a visit to
go to... for a visit?
或人想到某：sb. think(s) of sth.?
晋级表达：
sth. occur(s) to/strike(s) sb.. sb.
come(s) up with sth.
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3. 人际联络
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向或人抱愧：say sorry to sb.
晋级表达：
make an apology to sb.?
apologize to sb.
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因某事感谢或人：thank sb. for sth.
晋级表达：?
be grateful to?sb. for sth.?
express one's gratitude to sb. for sth.
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遇见：meet?
晋级表达：
come across
encounter
run into?
鼓舞或人：encourage sb.?
晋级表达：cheer sb. up?
撑持：support?
晋级表达：be in favor of
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向或人求助：ask sb. for help
晋级表达：turn?to sb. for help
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4. 润饰描述
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不一样品种的：different kinds of?
晋级表达：
a wide range of
a variety of
various
varieties of?
许多的，许多：a number of, a lot of
晋级表达：
a considerable number of
an?overwhelming majority of
large quantities of
scores of
dozens of
countless
numerous?
对...有利：be useful to，be good for?
晋级表达：
be of great benefit to
do good to
be?beneficial to?
.....构成：be made up of?
晋级表达：
consist of
be composed of?
疲倦不堪：be tired
晋级表达：
be worn out
feel exhausted
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5. 陈述实际
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几天前：a few days ago
晋级表达：the other day
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我们公认：people think that...?
晋级表达：it's acknowledged/accepted/ believed that..
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实践上：actually?
晋级表达：as a matter of fact
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谈及：talk of/about, mention?
晋级表达：
refer to
speak of
when it comes to
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显着：clealy?
晋级表达：apparently , obviously
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大约：should?
晋级表达：be supposed to
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句式丰厚，显示文采
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作文中呈现过多的简略句会给人单调庸俗之感，语句与语句之间的联络也会显得松懈；而文章中过多地呈现复合句又显得负担，读起来吃力。
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考生要想写出一篇优良的作文，需要恰当地运用较高档的语法规划，这样可以使文章规划更紧凑，言语更丰厚，表达更出彩。
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攻略1：以事/物最初，使表达更地道
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适可而止地运用被逼句以及一些以事/物最初的语句，会使语篇联接性更强、规划更紧凑、要点更杰出、表达更地道，如：
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例2：i thought of an idea when i read the article.?我读这篇文章时有了个主意。
晋级表达：a good idea?occurred to/hit/struck me when i read the article.
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攻略2：以非主语最初，添加体现力
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多运用非主语成分隔头的语句不但能使写作句式多样化，而且能有用地向阅卷教师展示自个的言语功底。
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1. 介词短语置于句首
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例3：you need to hand in a report together with your innovations , and you must explain?your idea and what materials you have used.?
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晋级表达：along with your wonderful?innovations, you need to hand in a report explaining how the idea?occurred to?you and?what materials you have used.
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2. 运用独立主格规划/with复合规划
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例4：as time goes by, more and more people begin to realize the importance of?protecting the environment.
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晋级表达：with time going by, more and more people begin to?realize the importance of protecting the environment.
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攻略三：巧用副词和描述词，生动形象
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在写作中，考生可将副词置于句首增强文章的联接性或用以偏重、显示语句的豪情颜色，也可以将描述词置于句首或句末，增强心境感染力，使语句更生动形象。
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例5：unfortunately, my grandpa caught a serious cold several days ago due to climate?change and he is still in hospital now.
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攻略四：活用非谓语，精简表达
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1. 运用非谓语动词(短语)联系简略句，前进表达
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考生可以使用非谓语动词(短语)对两个甚至两个以上的简略句进行联系，使语句愈加简练、凝练，表达更高档。?
例6：it's widely acknowledged that china boasts abundant and unique cultures. they range from calligraphy to folk dances and local operas.?
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晋级表达：it's widely acknowledged?that china boasts abundant and unique cultures,?ranging from calligraphy to folk dances?and local operas.
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2. 运用非谓语动词(短语)简化复合句，精粹言语
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在表达凌乱意义的时分，常常用到复合句，语句有时会较长，考生可以使用非谓语动词(短语)对复合句进行简化，使言语更精练。
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例7：when i saw a car running towards her, i reached my hand out and pulled her?back.?
晋级表达：seeing a car running towards her, i reached my hand out and pulled her?back.
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攻略五：巧用三大从句，丰厚规划
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1. 运用定语从句，让表述更饱满
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例8：this semester our school offers many optional courses to the students and each of them appeals to many students.
本学期咱们学校为学生供给了许多选修课，每一门都招引了许多学生。?
晋级表达：this semester our school offers many optional courses to the students, each of which appeals to many students.?
2. 运用名词性从句，让表述更具体
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例9：her daughter satisfied all the admissions requirements. she was satisfied with the result. 她的女儿契合一切选择条件,她很满足。?
晋级表达：she was satisfied with?the result that her daughter satisfied all the admissions requirements.
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3. 运用状语从句，让逻辑更清楚
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例10：the task is tough. but there is no doubt that we will overcome all the difficulties and succeed.这项使命是艰巨的。可是毫无疑问,咱们会战胜一切的困难并获得成功。
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晋级表达：no matter how tough/however tough the task is, there is no doubt?that we will overcome all the difficulties and succeed.
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攻略六：套用提分句式，晋级表达
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1. 运用偏重句，杰出要点
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例11：i didn't calm down until my head teacher patted me on the shoulder.直到校长拍了拍我的肩膀,我才恬静下来。?
晋级表达：it was not until my head teacher patted me on the shoulder?that?i calmed down.
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运用偏重句 可以加强口气，杰出所表达的情豪情绪或许杰出某些人扣或作业。
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2. 运用倒装句，以示偏重
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例12：we got to the farm and then started to plant trees.咱们到了农场,然后初步种树。
晋级表达：hardly had we got tothe farm when we started to plant trees.
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恰当地运用例装句可以使文章句式更手富，要点更显着。
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3. 运用虚拟口气，表达观点
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例13：your selfless assistance made me achieve such great progress in english.你忘我的协助让我在英语方面获得了如此大的前进。
晋级表达：?had it not been for your selfless assistance, i couldn't have made such great progress in english.
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虚拟口气可以用来传递激烈的甘心，表达说话人的心思和真实感触。
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4. 运用省掉方法，避免负担
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例14：if i'm given the job, i'm?sure to be a good guide.
晋级表达：if given the job, i'm sure to be a good guide.
假定我得到了这份作业，我必定会变成一名好导游。
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略方法可以避免重复，使语句简练紧凑、信息杰出。
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5. 运用感叹句，传递情感
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例15：i was happy to be one of the members in your team.
晋级表达：how happy i was to be one of the members in your team !
我很高兴变成你们团队的一员。
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感叹句可将说话人的情感愈加强更地表达出来，使描绘更生动。
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规划清楚，浑然天成
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规划紊乱、逻辑不清是写作失分的一个重要缘由。
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写作时要留心语句内部、句与句之间、段与段之间的联接性和逻辑性，可以用过渡表达把文章的不一样有些奇妙地联接在一同。
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这样，文章会愈加联接、天然和紧凑，期间或文章的条理也会更清楚，中心思维也会更清楚。
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攻略：紧记常用过渡表达
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考生可以根据意思和作用来选择适合的过渡表达，常用的过渡表达归纳如下：
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1. 期间开始的过渡表达:?
generally speaking
to begin/start with
first of all
in?the first place
as we know
as is known to all
as is shown in?
2. 期间结束进行总结的过渡表达：
to sum up
in conclusion
in a word
in?summary
all in all
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3. 时刻顺度的过渡表达：
first/second/third
(soon)afterwards?
meanwhile?
finally?
at?first/at last?
in the beginning/in the?end?
subsequently?
eventually?
5. 说明阐明的过渡表达：
in fact?
as a?matter?of fact??
in?other?words?
namely?to?put it?differently?
6.?标明因果的过渡表达：
considering that??
owing to?
due to??
because
therefore
as a result?
consequently
thereby?
thus?
so
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7.?标明偏重的过渡表达：certainlyindeedabove allsurelyto tell (you) the truth
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8.?标明递进或弥补的过渡表达：?
in addition
also
moreover
what's more
besides
to 
make matters worse
worse still
more/most importantly
last but not least
additionally
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9.?举例或例举的过渡表达：
for example
for instance
such as
... be as follows
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10.?标明让步或转机的过渡表达：
but/however/though/yet
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11.?标明比照或比照的过渡表达：
like/unlike
in the same way
similarly
in contrast
whereas
instead/instead of
while
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12.?标明观念的过渡表达：?
personally
from my perspective
in my opinion
i'm fully convinced that?
as i see it
as far as i'm concerned
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