新东方托福写作语料库 年长者的主张是不是愈加价值

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 【观念类】

  Getting advice from friends who are older than you is more valuable thangetting advice from friends your same age.从年长的兄弟处得到的主张比从同龄的兄弟处得到的主张愈加有价值,是不是认同?(2009 年11月1日)

【作家情绪】撑持年长者的主张比之同龄人的主张愈加有价值。

【新东方网薛鹏思路拓宽】

俗?担航抢系睦?讲的的是年长者的人生才智和日子经历。当你遇到窘境的时分,需要来自别人的主张,天然,年长的者人生才智,日子阅历,思辨脑筋关于咱们的辅导意义更大。因为,年长者的经历可以令咱们不走或许少走弯路。风趣的例子就是:大学的恋爱风花雪月,男生喜爱秀丽女神,女人喜爱帅气的男生,可是,单纯的恋爱被浅陋的高兴招引,情侣们很少思考家庭的背就连或许是两种的快乐喜爱志趣是不是相同,这时分,年长兄弟的主张关于将来夸姣婚姻是有很重要的影响,因为,年长兄弟阅历过了才懂得大学夸姣恋爱不等于将来调和的婚姻,只是有爱是不能成婚的。再比方:年青人肄业的时分,可以选择海外留学或许国内读书,这时分,可以父辈们的主张和鼓舞关于咱们学业成功就有极端重要的辅导意义,因为,许多的年青人都是读书无知道,人生无知道。年长者的眼光一般很长远,年长者的经历一般很丰厚,因而,他们的主张是重要的。

【新东方网薛鹏自创语料库】

1. get advice from sb…… = acquire suggestions from sb……= gain guidance fromsb …… v 从……中获得主张 (辅导)

2. A is more valuable than B = A is better than B = A is superior to BA比B愈加有价值

3. friends of similar age = peers n 同龄人

4. have deeper understanding about life v关于日子有更深化的了解

5. can help us make sound judgment v协助咱们做出合理的判别

解析:sound = reasonable adj 合理的

6. have rational mode of thinking v有愈加理性的思维

解析:rational adj理性的

7. Every one of us grow up by experiencing failure or hardship, sometimes,one might feel puzzled so that he or she needs advice and guidance from others.生长中,人人阅历了失利和艰苦,有时分,人会感到苍茫,所以,人需要来自别人的主张和辅导。

拓宽:feel perplexed = feel puzzled = feel confused v 感到很利诱

8. Advice from older friends deserves more praises, although suggestionsfrom peers are never without their merits. 来自年长者的主张愈加值得赞许,尽管同龄人的主张不是没有利好。

9. Rich life experience including those bitter or painful experience couldbe seen as a kind of precious wealth. 丰厚的人生经历可被作为是名贵的财富,即就是那些苦楚和苦楚的阅历。

10. In this case, older friends could be our best teachers because theyhave accumulated a pool of life wisdom, thus, their advice could be preciouslife guidance. 因为他们堆集了丰厚的人生才智,他们的主张是一笔名贵的财富。

点评: 需要例子打开。

11. My brother Paul had studied in America for more than five years,that iswhy he strongly recommended me to study abroad when facing with the option ofstudy at home or furthering my study in a foreign country.哥哥保罗在美国学习五年多了,因而,在我选择是国内读书仍是海外留学的时分,他激烈地主张我出国留学。

解析:to further my study in a foreign country v海外留学

12. His suggestion is that I could become mature, independent and confidentby personal struggle in an unfamiliar environment.假定在陌生的环境中自我斗争,我可以变得愈加老到,独立,自傲。

13. After listening
新东方托福写作语料库 年长者的主张是不是愈加价值插图
to my brother’s advice, I studied even hard during theprocess of self-improvement, I happily found that I can be more focused, andhave more self-control.听了我哥哥的主张,我学习愈加尽力,我惊喜地发现我可认为了愿望变得愈加专心和自控。

拓宽:be come focused = become more attentive 变得愈加专心

拓宽:focus on= zero in on = concentrate on v 专心于……

14. I had a clear goal to fight for. It is the suggestion from my botherthat helped to hardened my heart to study overseas.我有了清楚的斗争方针,正是哥哥的主张协助我下定决计海外学习。

15. I believe in my choice, for the life wisdom learning from my brothercould be considered as a shortcut to success,which helps me avoid detour.我信赖我的选择,因而来自哥哥的人生才智是成功的捷径,协助我少走弯路。

解析:avoid detour v 少走弯路

16. Our peers’ understanding about life is far from mature compared withthose from older friends because older friends are more far-sighted and wise.比较年长的兄弟,同龄人关于日子的了解远非老到,因为年长的兄弟愈加有远见和正确。

拓宽:future-minded adj 有前瞻性的;

拓宽:provident = far-sighted adj有远见的

17. He who gives no thought to the difficulties in the future is sure to bebeset by worries much closer at hand. 人无远虑必有近忧。

解析:be beset by ……,被……烦扰;被……困惑

18. The older,the wiser 姜仍是老的辣(年长者的才智愈加丰厚)

  【作者介绍】

新东方网专栏作家:薛鹏(@雅思小鹏哥),高中年代出书诗文集《选择刚烈》, 每年创造20万字托福雅思自创语料库以及范文。吉林大学外国言语学及使用言语学硕士。17年英语教育经历 (7年新东方雅思托福SAT教育阅历),前长春新东方功勋教师,多次培训出雅思和托福高分学员(雅思写作7.5分,托福写作29分)。

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